Friday, March 20, 2009

Elsa's Horse Adventure II

After she got done riding the horse, she took a nap in the nice warm sun under a tree. Then one of the horses woke her up. So, then Elsa played w/the horses. She was getting older and older until she was twenty years old. She started to think of some ideas; and she thought, Maybe I should build a house for myself and a barn for my horses. So, she got to work. Elsa got done w/the house and was busy working on the barn when a terrible storm came up! The storm was almost there, and the wind was blowing Elsa off her feet and up into the air! But one of the horses dashed over and saved her. Then they started to run away from the storm and into a forest. A flash of lightening caught the forest on fire! The girl and the horse were almost about to blow-up. Then the whole group of horses broke out of the corral and saved her. One horse was left in the burning forest, the horse that saved Elsa from blowing away. So, Elsa rode back in and helped the horse find her way back out. Elsa got burned some. The horse put her to bed and gave her some medicine. The End.

5 comments:

  1. Oh Allyson...that was one of the best stories I have ever read! I was just sitting on the edge of my seat to find out what was going to happen to Elsa. Is there going to be Elsa's Horse Adventure III? I sure hope so.

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  2. That was an exciting story, Allyson. Did Elsa get better from her burns? How long did she have to stay in the bed?

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  3. I sure enjoyed your horse story, Allyson. It got me so excited that I do not think I will be able to sleep well tonight. I will try to calm down a few hours before I go to sleep. You sure have a vivid imagination.

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  4. I was getting pretty scared there for a minute, feewee! I am glad they all got saved from the storm. I hope Elsa isn't burned too bad.

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  5. Allyson, I had a feeling that the story would go this way. Your writing skills are amazing! You must continue the story.

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